My Little Powem
Posted 18 April 2009 - 05:11 AM
There are seventy millions of souls
in the United Kingdom today,
when Glorianna reigned less than five.
And when William crossed from France, they say,
were just a million for him to conquer
people moving outward, from India maybe.
Taken with the evidence that lies beneath our feet,
man's history is plain to see,
it would seem to be only the purest deceit
to exchange facts for a theory
as the evolutionists have done.
Posted 18 April 2009 - 06:26 AM
Posted 18 April 2009 - 03:06 PM
Your writing style is unique. I've read some of your poems and they are interesting. I would say expand it a little further. I feel like it needs more... like it was cut off too abruptly.
Well, my poetry takes a bit of explaining really Adam, even I don't understand how it came about, but these last four months I have had a complete block, if you offered me a grand I don't think I could make 2 lines rhyme. Thanks for your reply as you did not comment on the unassailability or otherwise of the argument I assume you have seen this argument blown or shaken and so intellectually at least it's weak
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