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#21 Guest_Darkness45_*

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Posted 17 August 2009 - 02:28 AM

I don't think it's a haiku, the last line has one too many syllables I think. But what do I know, I essentially failed poetry whenever it came up in English class. :P

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Posted 17 August 2009 - 06:30 AM

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His name is mankind, mankind
and I surely hope that he will find
debates and discussions here a joy
and stimulating to his mind
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Posted 29 September 2009 - 12:36 PM

That's not haiku by any chance Totton?

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Nah just a ditty, I do haikus on me poetry blog,
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Tide coming in haiku
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Happy to meet
bringing flotsum with me
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Tide going out haiku
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Sorry to part
be back for jetsam later

Modern haikus do not stick to the old rule of 17 syllables.
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